A poem (For Georgia)
I could write for you a poem,
atleast once a week;or even twice a day.
But would their really be a point;
if it didn't feel what I meant to say.
And so instead I wait for times,
when inspiration and love entwine,
and then I write for you a poem,
which cuts short, but stops to say:
I'll love you till the bitter end,
and even on that rainy day...
Written by Luke(y) Skinner 17/9/06
Dedicated to Georgia Almond.
I could write for you a poem,
atleast once a week;or even twice a day.
But would their really be a point;
if it didn't feel what I meant to say.
And so instead I wait for times,
when inspiration and love entwine,
and then I write for you a poem,
which cuts short, but stops to say:
I'll love you till the bitter end,
and even on that rainy day...
Written by Luke(y) Skinner 17/9/06
Dedicated to Georgia Almond.
posted by olivebranch at 4:40 PM
1 Comments:
Ht Luke,
It was good to meet you tonigh, thanks for your contribution.
A word of feedback on your poetry. One of the risks of rhyme is that the observance of rhyming rules can drown out other threads/traces/energies/subtleties in the writing.
All the best...
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