Monday, February 19, 2007

This is my edit of a new Attawie Poem :)
She will be here and posting VERY soon :)

here's my edit, her finished original will come later!!!

I'm afraid to switch off the light,
Afraid to stay alone at night.
Sitting lonely in my cold bed,
Crazy thoughts reign in my head.

Trying so hard but struggling to sleep,
Remembering the promises
you just couldn't keep..

Trying to move on,
telling myself those days are gone;
and they say that life goes on,
But to them I say:
"not when you're still holding on" ..

Life is harsh when you're alone,
Trying to make it on your own;
looking back at scars,
that time can not heal;
brings back memories,
and the pain I feel.

Aimlessly I wonder here and there,
Searching for someone who might truely care .

Let it go, let me be;
I'm not who I used to be.
Move alone, carry on;
it's not the way it used to be,

but that's the way it's meant to be..

By Attawie Feb, 8th 2007. 2:20 AM
Edited by Luke(y) Skinner 19/02/07 8:45pm

This is not quite poetry, but it could be soon enough:

http://fba1221.blogspot.com/2007/02/youtube-maybe-not-such-waste-of-time.html