Friday, July 31, 2009

The wind was whining
The sky was crying
Tears fell down on the city
Winter has brought him again.

I looked into the face
Examine these eyes
Wander my sight
Trying to read emotions behind

I looked for wrinkles
If they were on forehead
If anger drew them
Or hard times

Tried to trace yet another wrinkle
Around the lips
On the cheeks
To trace a memory of smile

Cold emotionless face
Looking me in the eye
With indifference stare
And a "whatever" lie

Bored rude attitude
Telling unspoken words
"Stand still, you can't run
As much as you cannot hide"

4 Comments:

Blogger attawie said...

anyone to edit? :)

9:02 AM  
Blogger olivebranch said...

sure eni, will do it now

1:01 AM  
Blogger olivebranch said...

Here's my edit eni :)

The wind was whining
The sky was crying
tears falling upon the city
winter had brought him again.

I look into the face
Examining these eyes
Wandering my sight
to read emotions behind

I looked for wrinkles
etched upon the forehead
If drawn by anger
and hard times

Tried to trace
another wrinkle
Around the lips
curved up the cheeks

The memory of smile.

Cold, an emotionless face
staring me in the eye
An indifferent stare
a "whatever" lie.

Bored, rude attitude
but I read between the lines

"Stand still, you can not run
As much as you cannot hide"

1:17 AM  
Blogger attawie said...

wow.. loving it :)
Thanks :)

6:12 AM  

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